Wednesday, 29 August 2012

ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY..( my term paper essay) hihi



Miss Zu said that she want make an argumentative essay today in the class but, I have to attend a rehearsal in Dataran Segamat (not like Dataran but field,,hihi) with ZANARIAH, SUHANA, AMANDA and JASMAN for Merdeka event that will be in FRIDAY 31 AUGUST 2012. 

The topic given by Miss Zu was "Women are becoming bolder as well as more aggressive and men are more sensitive". Agree/disagree with the statement. I disagree. and this is the result :) i don't know it's true or not.


Women are becoming bolder as well as more aggressive and men are more sensitive?
Is it true?


Usually we heard that men are bolder than women but they do not know that women can be like them. Nowadays we can see a lot of women be a successful person such us be a businesswomen. They brave to take a risk whereby to be a successful businesswomen are not easy, they might face a failure and loss. Even though women seem like courageous as well as more aggressive and men are more sensitive, but, in reality women are more sensitive while men are more brave and aggressive than women.

Some people believe that, women are more aggressive than men. Sometimes women become an aggressive because of some situation. In era globalisation, they have to be more aggressive to get same position like a man so that they have to work hardly. They already proved that they can be like men that is become a leader. However, they have to know that in family, they cannot be a leader. To begin with, men are more aggressive in during their work. When women are too aggressive in their work occasionally they cannot facing any trouble that come and it might be a problem to them. But men, they know how to control situation and brave in facing the hardest problem. So that is why men are more brave and aggressive than women.

Some people say that men are more sensitive than women. Have you heard that a man run away from home because of his mother scold him? Yes right. That is mean men are sensitive also, cannot accept any reprimand. They also be sensitive when someone used or damaged their lovely thing such us car or camera. On the other hand, women are more emotional in fact than men. Another point, women will express their feelings than men are. Judith Orloff (2007) state, when men showed their emotion, it is not macho. Women obviously show more sympathy and endurance while men are disposed toward problem and solution and they prefer talking of logic thing than of emotion. From that we can conclude men are better in control their emotion.

The final reason, women are aggressive because they want to become a strong person. Some of women at outside, they prefer to go Taekwondo training to learn how to protect their self from crime. Khatijah (n.d.) state, when have a crime that want to do something to her, she can fight back. Nonetheless, no matter how hard of female energy but they cannot match the energy of a man. Finally, what will you do when a crime come to you? Will you can bravely protect yourself. Women known as a mellow person and sometimes even they have acknowledged about protection but when they face the real crime, they will stuck and cannot do anything. That is why men are braver than women.

In conclusion, women are more sensitive and men are more aggressive and bolder. We can see in each of paragraph. Even though women like to compete with men but they have to know a man is born to become a leader. Women also known as a sensitive person where they cannot control their emotion and willing to show their feeling than men who acted as cool. Besides that, women prefer to go training like Taekwondo to learn about protection but they cannot beat the energy of men. From that we can see women are sensitive while men bolder and aggressive.

REFERENCES 

Judith Orloff (2007), are you too sensitive?. Retrieved from September 1,2012

Siti Khdijah RASHID (2077), the martial marks is necessary to women.

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