ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY..( my term paper essay) hihi

Miss Zu said that she want make an argumentative essay today in the class but, I have to attend a rehearsal in Dataran Segamat (not like Dataran but field,,hihi) with ZANARIAH, SUHANA, AMANDA and JASMAN for Merdeka event that will be in FRIDAY 31 AUGUST 2012. 

The topic given by Miss Zu was "Women are becoming bolder as well as more aggressive and men are more sensitive". Agree/disagree with the statement. I disagree. and this is the result :) i don't know it's true or not.

Women are becoming bolder as well as more aggressive and men are more sensitive?

Is it true?

Usually we heard that men are bolder than women but they do not know that women can be like them. Nowadays we can see a lot of women be a successful person such us be a businesswomen. They brave to take a risk whereby to be a successful businesswomen are not easy, they might face a failure and loss. Even though women seem like courageous as well as more aggressive and men are more sensitive, but, in reality women are more sensitive while men are more brave and aggressive than women.

Some people believe that, women are more aggressive than men. Sometimes women become an aggressive because of some situation. In era globalisation, they have to be more aggressive to get same position like a man so that they have to work hardly. They already proved that they can be like men that is become a leader. However, they have to know that in family, they cannot be a leader. To begin with, men are more aggressive in during their work. When women are too aggressive in their work occasionally they cannot facing any trouble that come and it might be a problem to them. But men, they know how to control situation and brave in facing the hardest problem. So that is why men are more brave and aggressive than women.

Some people say that men are more sensitive than women. Have you heard that a man run away from home because of his mother scold him? Yes right. That is mean men are sensitive also, cannot accept any reprimand. They also be sensitive when someone used or damaged their lovely thing such us car or camera. On the other hand, women are more emotional in fact than men. Another point, women will express their feelings than men are. Judith Orloff (2007) state, when men showed their emotion, it is not macho. Women obviously show more sympathy and endurance while men are disposed toward problem and solution and they prefer talking of logic thing than of emotion. From that we can conclude men are better in control their emotion.

The final reason, women are aggressive because they want to become a strong person. Some of women at outside, they prefer to go Taekwondo training to learn how to protect their self from crime. Khatijah (n.d.) state, when have a crime that want to do something to her, she can fight back. Nonetheless, no matter how hard of female energy but they cannot match the energy of a man. Finally, what will you do when a crime come to you? Will you can bravely protect yourself. Women known as a mellow person and sometimes even they have acknowledged about protection but when they face the real crime, they will stuck and cannot do anything. That is why men are braver than women.

In conclusion, women are more sensitive and men are more aggressive and bolder. We can see in each of paragraph. Even though women like to compete with men but they have to know a man is born to become a leader. Women also known as a sensitive person where they cannot control their emotion and willing to show their feeling than men who acted as cool. Besides that, women prefer to go training like Taekwondo to learn about protection but they cannot beat the energy of men. From that we can see women are sensitive while men bolder and aggressive.

REFERENCES 

Judith Orloff (2007), are you too sensitive?. Retrieved from September 1,2012

http://www.lhj.com/health/stress/relaxation-techniques/are-you-too-sensitive/?page=3

Siti Khdijah RASHID (2077), the martial marks is necessary to women.

http://www.ukm.my/monline/seni-mempertahankan-diri-satu-keperluan-bagi-golongan-wanita.html

PROBLEM AND SOLUTION

Today our class actually in the morning,,but,,Miss Zu have an emergency case so we have to make it at night,as usual,when we in lab we make an essay,,we do essay Problem and Solution today,,we are divided into 5 group and each of group must choose 1 video which is our topic in that movie that we choose,,my group choose video number 4 and get a topic women abuse men,,have u heard women abuse men,,haha I never heard and it 1st time for me,,

My point is women do the abusing to the men because they have being a victim of physical assault. Sometimes they feel depression because of work or they have a bad history in the past. In modern era globalisation,women tend to be like a men where they want the same position like men and they will feel depress due to achieve what they want. So when they feel depress or stress they will release their depression to another person such us to the men. For example, a girl slap or hit their partner because depress. In order to curve this physical assault  they can attend the anger managment and motivatioanal classes to reduce their depression. Media massa such us television or internet,they can introduce to public about anger managment classes to control their anger and usually that class called hypnotherapy where this therapy can release stress,anger and depression. For those who feel depress, they can attend this class.

here is the full essay of problem and solution

WOMAN ABUSE A MAN

Commonly, today we had listen a lot of social problem that involved many people such as vandalism, gangsters, rape, and abuse. Usually, people nowadays do not care if a man has been abuse by woman because we do not always listen about this issue. Can you think why a man does not take this case to the serious process? That is because they feel embarrassed to say that they were abuse by a woman. Some of men assume that abuse by woman is such a joking. Hence, women abuse a man can lead to various problem which are physical abuse, woman have higher standard than man, and woman who are raised by many brothers.

Women do the abusing to the men because they have being a victim of physical assault. Sometimes they feel depression because of work or they have a bad history in the past. In modern era globalisation, women tend to be like a men where they want the same position like men and they will feel depress due to achieve what they want. So when they feel depress or stress they will release their depression to another person such us to the men. For example, a girl slap or hit their partner because depress. In order to curve this physical assault they can attend the anger management and motivational classes to reduce their depression. Media mass such us television or internet, they can introduce to public about anger management classes to control their anger and usually that class called hypnotherapy where this therapy can release stress, anger and depression. For those who feel depress, they can attend this class.

A woman has higher position than men will also affect women abusing men. Many of women in Malaysia have higher position compared than their partner, because of that they are proud and insulted .C.Meyer (n.d) states that every 38 percent of  man is abused by a wife or girlfriend in the United States.  Abused men are not smaller or physically weaker than the women who abuse them. Abused men are usually not using their greater size or strength to hurt their abusive partners even when they are being hurt. Men who are suffered physical abuse make it silence because they are afraid that no one will believe them or take them seriously. Moreover, 20 percent of men who have been attacked by their girlfriends thought it is funny. In fact, some men who do try to get help find that they are ridicule and many of men are too embarrassed to admit that they are being abused by their partner. In order to curb women abusing men, a man has to work hard to get a good job. With the good job, women can’t abuse men and will not insult them.

Finally, factors that effects in abuse of men is influenced by the attitudes of many male siblings. That means, a woman who has a many male siblings in a family easy for her to follow a characteristic as male. So it can give an effect to a girl. For example, Shetteredmen says “in my house, being raised with a sister and three brothers, so it can give an affect to her such as she will be brutality”. Many brothers in a family can influence a sister to become brutality. In order, to solve this problem is they need to change themselves to be pure women. Other than that, they should have a gentle nature as a woman. As a result, abused men happen because women an influenced with her male sibling.

All in all, there are many factors of women abusing men which are they have being a physical assault, being raised with many brothers and women have higher position than men. However, it can be solved by many solutions that is attend the anger class, change their personality to be a more feminine women and the men need to work hard to have a good job so that they can have the higher position compare with the women. Therefore every party need to play their roles to solve this problem so that the men can get back their pride as a leader in family and also in the real world.    

REFRENCES

  

Cathy Meyer, When Women Abuse Men. Retrieved on February 16, 2009, from             http://divorcesupport.about.com/b/2009/02/16/when-women-abuse-men.htm

Cathy Meyer, (n.d)  , Prevent Violence Of Works, Retrieved August 27, 2012 from           http://www.prevention-violence.com/en/int-121.asp

Dr. Claudia Cornell on the emotional abuse of men by women.Retrieved on March 26, 2010, from http://www.theupperdeck.com/?p=641

Siti arina

Ummi nabilah

Siti farah

Zahirah

Suhana

we submit the essay on Wednesday.

SPEAKING,,oh my

I think after we submit our term paper to Miss Zu we can celebrate Hari Raya with peace BUT Miss Zu give us a task.. U know what it is??huhu speaking test..Miss give us 6 example of speaking and she want us to practice so that we can get ready for speaking test after Raya..We need to read a newspaper about latest news because when we do speaking test,we have to put the latest news about our topic..Miss Zu said that our speaking test are not an easy task because it include latest news..My group contain 4 members include me and my members are Hanifah,Umi, and Arina.

Owkeyh I have to go because I have to submit the complete term paper to Miss Zu before go back to hometown,,dada...

TERM PAPER : Peer Editing

Last week, Miss Zu ask us to do paragraph development and this today she want the complete essay..Miss Zu ask us to give the essay to another partner to check whether our essay have a mistake or not..She want a perfect essay where do not have any mistake in that essay..Hajar and Syahira are the person who check my essay..After that u know when to submit it??? huuuu before Raya u know,,so me and ira have to do it as soon as possible..Me and Ira do the best to that essay to prevent any mistake that will make our mark be deducted..Here is the peer editing by Hajar and Syahira :

Baby Abortion among Malaysian Married Couples: Pros and Cons

Out of every 1,000 teenagers and middle age of women go for abortion in Malaysia and the rate of illegal abortions is 0.1% or 500 per 500,000 live births yearly. Harian Metro, 5 April 2012 reported in Ipoh, women who had their abortions may risk their life to become underproductive to pregnant again because when women make an abortion for a few times, the possibilities to get pregnant after doing an abortion again are difficult. According to Harian Metro (n.d.), an abortion which does not follow the right procedure may give effects to their health and also life. On the other hand, all creatures in this world were created by our almighty God. We cannot simply kill the unborn babies without any reasons. Have you ever heard that kill a baby is same as a murder? Even though it may be not fully formed, but baby in first trimester will feel the pain in a process of an abortion. Even though abortion is seen as the most controversial topic of all the times which usually considered as negative connotation, however, due to several reasons abortion might be necessary for some married couple when their spouse life is at stake due to their health condition.

Opponents of this idea might claim that abortion is a wrong action thing in terms of religious belief no matter for what reasons. According to the MyKhilafah (2010), in all religion state that God unity is reflected in equality and unity of human kind. Every people, has his/her own chances to life in this world. So, we cannot simply do the abortion. MyKhilafah states, whoever does the abortion to the baby which is 4 month of pregnancies, it is forbidden. Quran also warns the believer that he or she who does not involved in marriage and parenting without the right attitude. However, this factual statement might be inconclusive whereby the pregnant woman’s life is jeopardized. To begin with, one of the reasons why abortion among married couples occurs in the first place is due to their health condition. There are many women who suffer from hazardous condition such as heart disease, diabetes and also kidney disease (Linda Lowen, n.d.). Women who are getting pregnant at late age which is who are 35 years and above are risky in having syndrome-down children (Dr Nor Ashikin Ahmad Mokhtar, 2004). Besides that, there are many women who are pregnant at the late age because of several factors such as they want to further their study, they are among of the career women and late in getting married.

Those who are against this idea may say that abortion seen as a cruel thing that occurs in this world. According to Health Guidance (n.d.) state that abortion is about denying babies life. It is because they will abort the baby when the time is not coming yet which 9 months and 10 days. Usually they will do the abortion when the pregnancy is less than 4 months because the zygote is not fully formed yet. There are many methods to do the abortions such as by using suction in which the doctor will paralyzes the cervix first and by using salt poisoning (saline injection) states by Centro Anael (n.d.). On the other hand, many people will argue about this problem in order to let everyone knows his/ her view. Some people will say that abortion is not a crime because they have their own reasons why they do that and the reason is as a birth control. The Chronicles (n.d.) found that abortion is occurs because they want to spend a quality time with their family and the children that they already have. They also want to give a full attention to their children so that their children will be a good person one day. Women in the developing countries like Malaysia are very conscious in their career especially when they hold the position that a man always dominated. So they will be more focus on their work until they decide to abort the baby in order to give a full attention on their work.

Some people may disagree with this idea which is to abort the baby, because it will give an effect to them. Dr James (2003) states that women who abort the baby, they may in risk whereby they may get a breast cancer. A drastically drop in the level of estrogens released from women’s body can caused a discontinuance of pregnancy and this will happen because rise of growth in the number of cells in the breast tissue. This cell reduplication wills increasingly the risk of getting breast cancer. Women who had an abortion they are maybe in danger to get a breast cancer compared to women that do not make an abortion. Nevertheless, women can avoid from be the one who suffer from breast cancer with prevent themselves from do an abortion. Finally, the reason why married couples do an abortion is due to the baby’s condition. According to Abu Harith (2008) if the doctor was make a test to the baby and found that the baby are disable and badly affected, so the doctors will advise to do an abortion before 4 month (120 days). Sometimes, the baby has a probability to get an AIDS, that’s why married couple aborts the baby and it is allowed to do that. Some cases happen when they scan their baby using ultrasound and suddenly the baby are not moving and they can’t hear the baby’s heart pumping anymore. When it happen, that’s mean the baby was dying and it called stillbirth. (Dr Raja Juhaidah 2008).

The fruit of the womb is a reward. We should view our children as the only valuable properties that we have. We should appreciate gifts from God because every creature has their own purposes in this world to contribute. However it still has a person that do an abortion. Why they do an abortion? Is it necessary to abort the baby? No, God give a child to love and take care of them and not abort them. Cancer of uterus, infertility and bleeding are some problems and complication that affect women once they do an abortion. Even though people seen an abortion from the negative perspective but sometimes abortion is necessary for some married couple for certain reasons. They must to do an abortion due to problem in health condition, as a birth control and because of the baby condition. What do you think when you go to hospital to scan your baby and then the doctor said that the baby in your womb was died? Of course you sad will feel sad and disappointed. But, you have to abort the baby in order to eliminate the bacteria in your womb. Indeed, abortion is not allowed as it is unreasonable reasons if someone doesn’t want to take responsibilities towards the baby. Allah is very wrath of people who do an abortion without strong reasons.

NEW FILM

Assalamualaikum everybody,,

I guess today we showed our paragraph development to Miss Zu,,

but we are not,,we do an interesting activity today,,

that is BEHIND THE SCENE,,we do like FORUM,,

just like we in the show where the producer will introduce a new movie that they have done,,

we sit in the group which is each group have at least 5 or 6 members,,

and we have 4 group and as usual I am the first group,,hihi

the purpose that we do this activity is to make us practice speak spontaneous be4 speaking test,,

LET'S GO TO THE SHOW,,

MY GROUP IS THE FIRST

NAME OF THE SHOW : FAMIRAZIZ

NAME OF THE SEGMENT : ARE YOU BRAVE ENOUGH???

THE HOST : FAMIRA

LIST OF THE PANELS : 

1. MIMIDRIS as The Director
2. AIDA AZMANI as the Producer
3. SHAWAL ARABELLA as the Main actor
4. JUST MAN as an actor
5. ZAHIRA MIXIE as an actor

This story is about a Princess Merida where she is a skilled archer and impetuous daughter of King Fergus and Queen Elinor. Determined to carve her own path in life, Merida defies an age-old custom sacred to the uproarious lords of the land: massive Lord MacGuffin, surly Lord Macintosh and cantankerous Lord Dingwall. Merida’s actions inadvertently unleash chaos and fury in the kingdom, and when she turns to an eccentric old Witch for help, she is granted an ill-fated wish. The ensuing peril forces Merida to discover the meaning of true bravery in order to undo a beastly curse before it’s too late.

NEXT GROUP IS GROUP HANIFAH

NAME OF THE SHOW : SYAHIRA HAMDAN.

NAME OF THE SEGMENT : A NEW FILM; PREVIEW ARTHUR CHRISTMAS.

THE HOST : SYAHIRA HAMDAN.

THE LIST OF PANELS :

1. HANIFAH as the Director
2. SUHANA SUKRI as the Main actor
3. RAFIDAH as an actor
4. RINA as an actor
5. AFIQ ALIAS as the Spectator

This story is about: Set on Christmas night, the story of Arthur Christmas at last reveals the incredible, never-before seen answer to every child's question: 'So how does Santa deliver all those presents in one night?' The answer: Santa's exhilarating, ultra-high-tech operation hidden beneath the North Pole. But at the heart of the film is a story with the ingredients of a Christmas classic – a family in a state of comic dysfunction and an unlikely hero, Arthur, with an urgent mission that must be completed before Christmas morning dawns.

GROUP MUADZ IS THE THIRD GROUP

NAME OF THE SHOW : MUADZ SHOW

NAME OF THE SEGMENT : HAPPY FEET 2

THE HOST : MUAZ

THE LIST OF THE PANELS :

1. HAJAR DAHALAN as the Director
2. RAHAYU as the Producer
3. ZANARIAH as the Main actor
4. NISA as an actor.

This story is about Mumble, The Master of Tap, has a problem because his tiny son, Erik, is choreo-phobic. Reluctant to dance, Erik runs away and encounters The Mighty Sven—a penguin who can fly! Mumble has no hope of competing with this charismatic n

ew role model. 

But things get worse when the world is shaken by powerful forces. Erik learns of his father’s “guts and grit” as Mumble brings together the penguin nations and all manner of fabulous creatures—from tiny Krill to giant Elephant Seals—to put things right.

THIRD GROUP IS GROUP AMIRUDDIN

NAME OF THE SHOW : TONIGHT SHOW'S

NAME OF THE SEGMENT : EUROPE'S MOST WANTED???

THE HOST : AMIRUDDIN

THE LIST OF PANELS :

1. SYAHIRA as the Director
2. ARINA as the Skrip Writer
3. SITI as the Main actor
4. ROSFARINA as an actor

This story is about The story continues from the events of the second film. Alex (Ben Stiller) has a nightmare about himself and his friends still stranded in Africa and finding they have all gotten old. Awaking from his dream, 

Alex suggests to Marty (Chris Rock), Melman (David Schwimmer), and Gloria (Jada Pinkett Smith) that they 

should go to Monte Carlo to get the penguins to fly them back to New York City, which they agree to.

DEBATE??? wauuuuu ^_^

Assalamualaikum JBM1123D,,

hye hye,,hiihi

you know what is our activity for today??? interesting activity for me,,

ha our activity today is DEBATE,,actually this activity for speaking practice,,

Miss Zu divided us into 4 group,,group government and group for opinion side,,

one group consists of 6 until 7 members and my group is government,,

THIS IS GROUP FIRST

OUR TITLE IS :

Is it considered cheating when your partner (girlfriend / boyfriend / husband / wife) was checking on other beautiful girls on Facebook (poking, liking, etc) ?

The government is agree boy/girl cheating their partner in Facebook. Boy/girl cheating in Facebook because they are bored with their partner, want to find a beautiful/handsome partner, and culture shock.

But the opinion side are not agree when boy/girl online Facebook to cheating their partner. Their reasons are boy/girl online Facebook to get more friends, make a business, just for fun. They also said a couple must trust with each other.

THIS IS GROUP TWO

THEIR TITLE IS :

Is it true that men are easy to work with and more creative than women especially when it involves group work?

The government said men are easy to work with and more creative than women especially when it involves group work. Why they said that because men are easy to tolerate, they are not to emotional which is they can control their emotion,  when study group with a man they can explain the detail point not like girl which is they try to memorize.

But the opinion side, they said women are easy to work with because they are more careful when do something, they don't like to do a work last minute, men are laziness and not confident, men like to talking nonsense thing, men cannot control their emotional.

After we do DEBATE activity, Miss Zu ask us which group is the best DEBATE,,

then my members said GROUP 1 which is my group hihihihi,,

thanks you all,,ok that's for today,,tq for read.. (^_^)\/

WRITING THE DEVELOPMENT PARAGHRAPH

haluhaaaaaaa,,hihi

do you know how to write development of the paragraph in term paper??

ha let me tell you because i have learn it today...

every development must have a topic sentences ( what the paragraph is all about)

Format of a development paragraph

1. Topic sentences
2. Supporting details 1
3. Supporting details 2
4. Supporting details 3
5. concluding the statement.

The topic sentences is followed by supporting details:

• To elaborates the idea further by explanation description, statistic and examples
• —To strengthen the argument / thesis / stand that has been put forward in the thesis statement.
  
  
  
  
  EXAMPLE FOR DEVELOPMENT PARAGRAPH:
  
  
       Children too can be protected with the practice of censorship. Everyone has to remember that television and movie theaters are not restricted for “adult only”. Children have a high tendency to imitate what they saw and heard from movies and television series. Vijaindren (2009) reported that many parents complained of the use of harsh and faulty languages the children picked up from what they watched be them cartoons or other so-called “children programmers”. She also gave few examples of children from using the four-letter words to even  a mutter to find a new parent when they are not satisfied with theirs. In addition, some “simple” scenes to adult can be very disturbing to children for instance the smoking scene. Parents educate their offspring that smoking is bad, but adults on television smoke with such ease and confidence. As a result of this, the children get confused. Another example of a disturbing scene is of course the exhibition of intimacy between a man and a woman which is forbidden in Asian culture in general.  The children will be  wondering why a parent turns off the television every time a couple is kissing. If the act is wrong, why do we have it on the television to be watched by everybody? Moreover, the parents sometimes are bombarded with difficult questions of this taboo subject since Asian adults are not very open when it comes to discussing sex especially with children. In short, snipping unacceptable languages and cutting demoralizing scenes off the movies and television series help protect children from lessons they are not ready for yet and save parents from some unpredictable embarrassing scenes.
  
  
  
  
  That's for today...tq for read
  
  

WHERE IS THE MAIN IDEA???

Assalamualaikum u alls,,hiihi today we learn about MAIN IDEA,,

the main idea of a passage is the thought that is the present from the beginning to the end,,

In finding main idea,ask yourself

• What idea is common to most of the text?
• What is the idea that relates the parts to the whole?
• What opinion do all the parts support?

you can find the direct MAIN IDEA,, for example:

Sleep problems can be avoided if you follow a few simple guidelines. First, don't drink alcoholic beverages or drinks with caffeine before bedtime. Next, do not exercise within three hours of bedtime. Finally, plan a sleep routine. Every day, go to bed at the same time and get up at the same time.

it also have an implied MAIN IDEA,,for example:

A backswimmer has a rounded back and it's underside is flat. When it floats on its back it's look like a little boat. It rows itself along in the water using its two hind legs like oars. The backswimmer spends most of its time upside down.

MAIN IDEA is ->> The backswimmer spends most of its time upside down.

IMPLIED means you have to figure main idea out by yourself

 after we make some exercise of MAIN IDEAS we sit in the group,,

as usual we divided into 5 group and at least 5 members in group,,

after that Miss Zu show us a short movie of PETRONAS,,

we have to understand the movie and conclude what is the MAIN IDEA from that movie,,

and then wrote the main idea at A4 paper and,,

each of group show their main idea to all of members in class,,first short movie,,

FIRST MOVIE

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After each of group show their main idea,group ZAFIRA is the best main idea,,

SECOND MOVIE

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After we saw the movie,Miss Zu give 15 minutes and we wrote the main idea,,

and group KHADIJAH is the best idea,,

this is my group's main idea for both movie,,my members is manda,fatin,me,suhana and mimi,,
event our main idea are not right but we have do the best,,
and know how to find an implied main idea...

THAT'S FOR TODAY,,Thank you for read & watching,, ^_^\/